How to write a Personal Statement
Begin by explaining why you want to study the course/subject area you are applying for. Show your committment and passion through your words. Why does it excite you to study this.
Talk about yourself! This is a Personal Statement about you and your interests, not only about subject. Talk about why you are a great fit for the course, what extra curriculur activities have you taken part in that will aide your application? What voluntary work have you done, what work experience etc?
What is the purpose of studying this course? What do you intend to get out of this? What are your career aspirations, and how will studying this course help you achieve this?
Get some feedback! Apart from your dedicated Consultant, ask two other people. Ask your college/school tutor and a family member. They will come up with different suggestions than what you may have thought, so their opinion will be very valuable!